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Pretty hair with dirty gloves
burning hearts with wrenching love
Love until the mind's content..
burn the barriers with hell's consent.

Pretty face with makeup lost
skin is clean with burning cost
spare the rules and break the trust
fill the emptiness with lust.

Pretty dress with ribbon bright
twinkle under stars of night..
Feeling high on moon's dark glow
moon moves fast, yet night runs slow.

Pretty innocence, eyes so blue
trimmings turn 12 to 22..
lend the night your girlish charms..
you grew up fast and fell to harm

Pretty child who learnt too fast
New not love yet void so vast.
Wrenched for treasure, face unkown
child's heart of beauty, now heart of stone.

Pretty eyes, once bright, once blue
losing now their childish hue..
hurt and pain the brain control
who rape the mind and torture the soul

Pretty days, with endless sky
forgetting life, they want to die
lost my hope along the way..
all I want, this pretty day.
©2003-2010 ~-elly-
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This is kinda a story, kinda just a disgusted view of how kids (my age and younger) grow up too fast.

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:iconbuffycrazycarls:
wow this is really good, very good imagery to go with it.
good work hunny, and i hope that you don't feel like this

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:iconilament:
woah.. :thumbsup: . very well written, great imagery.
:iconh3llbringer:
nice...
and yeah, kids are growing up too fast these days...
oh well, i don't like those little kids anyways >.>

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:icon-elly-:
thanks :)

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:iconschmitt:
nice it's really good :)

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Der folgende Satz ist eine Lüge.
Der vorige Satz ist wahr.
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thanks :)

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:iconcelia69:
You know I like it, awesome job man, tops.

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:iconkaulana:
Wow! This is my favourite out of what I've read of your stuff. It's so.. it could be a song. It's beautiful, I love the concept. You find all the right words to use..

By the way though. Lernt isn't a word. ;) Fifth stanza.
:icon-elly-:
lol, thanks.. adn thanks for hte fave!! :D

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